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I've written poetry since I was 11 (7 years ago). It is my hope that I have improved since then. A lot of what I write is meant to be used in a lyrical way, but I write strict poetry, also. I'm a buffet of words, so to speak.

Tuesday, April 04, 2006

Words

Words can be as cruel as a bullet
Piercing our skin and making us bleed
Invading our insides without any notice
With the sound of the shot, it’s too late to take heed
And those of us who claim to be
Those who’d never touch a gun
So often hold the barrel where
We know great damage will be done

As soon as we shoot, we drop the weapon
The scent of the shot fired still in the air
And we run oh-so-quick to escape from the crime
Knowing what we did back there

Words can be as cruel as a war
Making the bravest man shrink
Thrown out like a grenade
They destroy in just a blink
And even the foxholes won’t protect us
The strongest of shelters, oh they’re still weak
Courage weakens so fast out in battle
It weakens so fast when war’s what we speak

And as soon as we shoot, we drop the weapon
The scent of the shot fired still in the air
And we run oh-so-quick to escape from the crime
Knowing what we did back there

Words can be as cruel as we make them
With our hearts so beat up, they often come out
As mean and as tough as the deadliest weapons
To make us feel like we’re fine without
The best suit of armor, indestructible walls
But oh how quickly the best men can fall…

As soon as they shoot, they drop the weapon
The scent of the shot fired still in the air
And they run oh-so-quick to escape from the crime
But it’s not just their prints on the weapon back there
It’s not just the violence that makes this unfair
It’s not just the heart that drips in despair
Words can be cruel yet so unaware

7 Comments:

Blogger WordPool said...

wow, i like this, people never understand that words are cruel. wow good poem

7:37 PM  
Blogger BexiBabes said...

Hiya...my name is Bexi and I live in the UK and I write songs and make cd's and your poetry has the most amazin words i have eva seen...the words are so powerful...!!!

1:24 PM  
Blogger Emiloveyouxo said...

I just wrote me responce on it!!! hehe

7:03 PM  
Blogger QuiShonda said...

WAT DA FUK IZ DIZ???? I ASKED 4 RHYMIN WORDS NOT A DAMN POEM!!!!!

7:21 PM  
Blogger Sheena said...

loved ur poems
esp this one
so touching
keep up the good job

3:44 PM  
Blogger Alvina said...

wow,
your damn good.
irespect yer poetry ;]

4:39 PM  
Blogger Ramachandruni said...

Beautiful words youve written
You left me no corner to pen
So here I send you all the best
Hope you sparkle with many a poems because a poet brain never rests
I am 14 and I too write poems like you
I hope even my words are so very true

5:51 AM  

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